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Self-injury injures EVERYONEEverytime you cut, Whenever you pull that damned blade out of the pencil sharpener That some see as a mere tool in the educational environment, You gnaw and pierce away at your fragile skin. And cover my wrists with scars of burden.Self-injury injures EVERYONE
Everytime you shake from your self-inflicted blood loss, I begin to quiver. I can't begin to control my aching hands to wipe my silent tears. How could I even know if I'm blinking? Even blindfolded as I am, I can see your features perfectly.
I notice your hard stone eyes, ridged from trying to cover the pain; Your icy pale skin calm fr
by ~sasukedigamote
Firefly, no.Firefly, come. Come out from the grass. Free yourself into this beautiful world.Firefly, no.
Firefly, glimmer. Share your halo with me. Show me the light at the end of the tunnel.
Firefly, kiss me. Tickle me with your fragile body. Make me feel the glory of symbiosis.
Firefly, stay. Please don't fly away. I need you, you clueless little bug.
Firefly, so unstable. The heavens are calling you. I wish I was selfless enough to bid you,"Go."
Firefly, so ignorant. I wish to have you, also. Why can't you fly in both directions
by ~sasukedigamote
Moira rocks my socks XDMoira,Moira rocks my socks XD
Congradulations on your move. I'm glad you're trying new things; some say you have to try new ingrediants until you find the recipe that tastes the best. Let me start by saying, "How cool are you?". It takes a really strong person to make a huge change like that. Moira, I believe you are one of those strong people. I think if you try hard, you can do almost anything. You're gifted, Moira. I know you could be the best student at your new school, if you wanted to. I know, you'd rather just draw
by ~sasukedigamote
Second BestYou are the best thing that ever happened to me.Second Best
My destiny was set in stone the minute I looked at you.
As you fell from the sky looking so beautiful, I knew I was screwed.
It was decided at that moment that I would live and die all for you.
You became everything to me; your tears made me cry, your smile made me fufilled.
I love looking at you; your hair like silk blown in the wind, your twinkling blue gray eyes.
You always belonged to someone else. You always loved him, he always treated you like dirt.
Shortly after, you would fall for anot
by ~sasukedigamote
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- Sana -Ang paglubog ng araw- Sana -
Diwa ko'y naglalakbay Guhit ng palad sa aking mga kamay Kapalaran ang kulay.
Kung ika'y nalulungkot Sa iyong pag iisa Alalahanin mo ang tumawa At tayo'y magsaya.
Kumirot man ang puso mo Huwag kang lalayo Paniwalaan mo Pag-ibig ko sa'yo.
Ang iyong mga titig Nagdadala ng ligalig Sana siya ay kalimutan At ako ang iyong hagkan.
Sana…
Sa ating mundo May tila isang anghel Dati rati'y nahahagkan Ngayo'y pangarap na lang
At bakit aking natatanaw Ang aki
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"What if they were right? What if middleschool IS the best years of our life?"
"Then we'd all be a step up on the depression scale. You'd be depressed, Daniel'd be suicidal, and I'd be popping out of coffins sucking everyone's blood."
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Quest for Shadows
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Book of Days
Cybercon: A New Day
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Amin khiluva lle a' gurtha ar' thar.
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"What if they were right? What if middleschool IS the best years of our life?"
"Then we'd all be a step up on the depression scale. You'd be depressed, Daniel'd be suicidal, and I'd be popping out of coffins sucking everyone's blood."
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Quest for Shadows
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Book of Days
Cybercon: A New Day
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Amin khiluva lle a' gurtha ar' thar.
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"What if they were right? What if middleschool IS the best years of our life?"
"Then we'd all be a step up on the depression scale. You'd be depressed, Daniel'd be suicidal, and I'd be popping out of coffins sucking everyone's blood."
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I'm very happy with who I am.
I'm ecstatic about who I am.
I't who everyone else is that depressess me.
~Ben Harper, (My Family)
それはひみつです。
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"What if they were right? What if middleschool IS the best years of our life?"
"Then we'd all be a step up on the depression scale. You'd be depressed, Daniel'd be suicidal, and I'd be popping out of coffins sucking everyone's blood."
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I'm very happy with who I am.
I'm ecstatic about who I am.
I't who everyone else is that depressess me.
~Ben Harper, (My Family)
それはひみつです。
As I look at the poem again, I noticed that every stanza follows the rhythmic pattern of "a,b,c,b" except the first, which if i remember correctly was "a,b,c,d". Unless you plan to broadcast your work specifically to an audience of people who would be irritated by that, I wouldn't worry too much about that.
I actually see it as more of a device that tells me about the speaker. It's almost as if the narrarator is introducing a topic which is hard for him/her to explain, and therefor, he/she is trying hard to organize their thoughts to a slightly less intelligent audience. So unless someone complains specifically about it, I'd say to leave it as is.
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"What if they were right? What if middleschool IS the best years of our life?"
"Then we'd all be a step up on the depression scale. You'd be depressed, Daniel'd be suicidal, and I'd be popping out of coffins sucking everyone's blood."
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